Today for for this blog post, I am going to tell you about my amazing hotspot writing!
In our writing there is a instruction that says " Finish the table below by describing each of the telling sentences". We have to turn the telling sentence into a showing sentence!
Here is my Hotspot!
Week 2
Finish the table below by describing each of the ‘Telling’ sentences.
31-07-19
SHOW
Don’t Tell
Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano.
Brian was angry. He started to yell.
An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears.
Johnny felt sad.
Bailey was full with laughter and she couldn't stop smiling.
Bailey was happy.
Jeremy’s widened eyes grew bigger and bigger as he got shocked in his test.
Jeremy was shocked.
Tama was jumped around in his afternoon match from excitement.
Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon.
SHOW
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Don’t Tell
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Brian pursed his lips and clenched his fists into tight balls. Try as he might he could not contain himself. Within seconds he erupted like a volcano.
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Brian was angry. He started to yell.
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An ache started deep in his stomach. He turned away as his eyes welled up with tears.
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Johnny felt sad.
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Bailey was full with laughter and she couldn't stop smiling.
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Bailey was happy.
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Jeremy’s widened eyes grew bigger and bigger as he got shocked in his test.
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Jeremy was shocked.
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Tama was jumped around in his afternoon match from excitement.
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Tama was excited by the rugby match he was playing in that afternoon.
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