EasTTle Term 4!!!!!!

Hello Readers!


Welcome back to my blog post and today I am going to tell you about our end of the year EasTTle! 

We had a picture and it was about the Waterpark. I made a story about going to the Waterpark.

We are learning to:

Use our Language features = Onomatopoeia, Hyperbole, Personification, Alliteration and Simile.

Show not tell

Using our 5 senses and describing them into a story. 

Using ' ing ' in a sentence.

My title of my story is... " What a lovely day! " Here is my Writing:

What a Lovely Day

“ Let’s go to the Waterpark!!!! “ said Azula. Azula is the youngest
child in the family.
“ Mummy!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Can we go to the Waterpark. I’m hot!!!!!! “ said
Clementine.
“ OKAY FINE JUST DON”T SHOUT AT ME! “ said Mum.  “
Dad come on what took you so long?! “ said Azula.
“ Sorry honey I’m busy I can’t go with you, how about you guys go
to the
Waterpark with your Mum 

okay? “ said Dad. They drove to the Waterpark,
“ Are we there yet? “ said Azula. “ We’re here! “ said Mum.
They change to their swimming clothes on and went to different
waterslides.

BEEP! BEEP! Jhrnylle  came and had a chat with her Mum.
“ Mum can I go in Boracay with my friends  Rheanne
and Sky for just one week? “ said Jhrnylle .
“ Sure here is the $100 and make sure you don’t do something
crazy there! I will look in your profile account if you do something
wrong or crazy! “ said her Mum.
“ Thanks Mum your the best! “ said Jhrnylle.
“ Mum! Mum! I’m done swimming in this Waterpark! Let’s go and
eat! “ said Azula.
“ okay, let’s go! “ said their Mum.
“ Mommmmmmmmm!!!!!!!!! Let’s go home! “ said Clementine.
“ Okay! “ said their Mum. They drove back home happily ever after!

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