Writing Term 4!

Namaste Readers!


Welcome back to my blog post about my Writing! But this Writing is a different one. 

We are learning to only write 100 words. I managed to finish my Writing. 

Our goal is:

• Use strong ideas when writing.
• Eliminate unnecessary ideas and words.
• Only include what is powerful, meaningful and important.

Think!

• Do I need to write this sentence?
• Is it going to help my message or just confuse the audience? 

• What is the most powerful sentence to write? 
• Can I add these two sentences together instead of writing two separate sentences?

Here is my Writing!

My shoes were soaked and the rain wouldn’t stop.
A grey car I didn’t recognise pulled up beside me.
The grey car was old and rusty.
The owner was a woman, she was looking at me and her face was exquisite.
She was scary and creepy. 

BEEP! I looked out in the kitchen window, “ It’s Mum and Dad “ I was feeling fragile when we were eating. “ What’s wrong? “ said Mum. “ Nothing, it’s just the blustery weather outside. I kept on thinking of the creepy grey car. Disillusioned with what I needed to do now.


Thank you for reading this Writing blog post and have a great day! Bye!