Welcome back to back blog post lately I haven't do my SLJ but I will still catch up!
Today I am going to show you my Space Poem. This task was about Neil Armstrong and his Spacecraft which was called Apollo 11. Here it is!
Thank you for reading this blog post and have a wonderful day!
Kia Ora Celine!
ReplyDeleteMy name is Nadia, I'm a year 11 Hornby High student and I will be commenting on some of your posts for the SLJ 2020!
Great job on catching up on the blog posts that you have missed, you will be sure to get more points as long as they are top quality posts! This is a great post, you have really caught my eye with this beautiful poster.
I am especially impressed with the amazing writing you have done. Sometimes poetry can be extremely difficult, I know I found it difficult when I was in Primary school! What gave you the inspiration to use those particular words? You have done an excellent job, I particularly like the fact you created a really beautiful poster that goes with the theme of the post. What did you use to design it? Maybe I can start using it sometime for my own school work.
Next time, do you think you could write a small blurb at the start of the post explaining what the Summer Learning Journey is and what the task was. I think this will improve your post because it will help explain to new readers what the SLJ is if they do not know, and so it can also help the reader understand the task, so they can give you feedback accordingly.
Great job on this post Celine- keep up the great work
I hope to see a reply or two from you, it will get you more points the more you reply to comments, and comment on others work,
Until next time
- Nadia :)
Kia Ora Nadia!
DeleteThank you for your amazing feedback! Thank you for also making me feel better by saying things like I'm going to catch up! What inspires me on that poem was because every time I see a jet flying up I tell to my little brother that sometime we could get a very nice view of the moon and the jet.
What I use for the transparent moon is that my teacher showed us this link that you could take the background. Maybe I could link it sometime! And yes on my next post I will tell the readers what Summer Learning Journey is.
Have an amazing holiday!
Kind Regards,
Celine:)
You are so welcome!
DeleteEveryone is capable of doing amazing things. You are doing such a great job of catching up, it's going to take time, but so does growth. Growing and developing your mind takes time. You are capable of amazing things, it just takes time and effort.
Thats awesome Celine, I think linking it would be so useful for the viewers reading your posts because maybe they could use it in the future! Very useful to link the sources and other things you used so maybe the viewers could use them too!
What has your favourite part of the journey so far?
Good luck for your next posts!
- Nadia :)